Without being to mean to anyone on her, as I don't know there ages or backgrounds. There is alot of poor English, don't get me wrong, i'm all for slang, but incorrect use of commas? please, i've seen my 6-year old brother do better.

I supose this is easy for me to say, as my English GCSE coursework is marked at an A. But I still find it annoying when people get the very basics wrong, but, I guess i'm just picky like that.